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100 points (current score)
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Uploaded: Dec 23, 2008
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Made in Paint Shop Pro X. My first scrapbook page I have published, but surely there will be more. The reason is my first grand-daughters birth the 18th of December. Have the pocket, heart, eyelet, bow, and backgrund as transparent png if someone is interested. Just send me a note. Enjoy "This page is in the Critique Me challenge. Please tell me what you think I can do to improve this page. Any comment that does not follow this request will be deleted. Thanks!" 6 comments from before
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tulip_designs says:
Thank you for joining the critique me challenge. You have all the elements of a great page in the wrong places. I think the picture would stand out more if it were larger. Try moving the elements around to accent the picture more. Also, I would get a more intricate word art.
Jan 4, 2009
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BonnieMac says:
I love the paper. I think the font for a newborn baby girl could be softer, more frilly. Also, to add warmth to the page put the baby's name, date of birth and something personal. Great page for a first timer!!
Jan 10, 2009
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Granny Franny says:
Congratulations on the birth of your first granddaughter! I would like to say I think the "Critique Me" Challenge is a super idea for learning... I like the paper that you chose for your page and the elements, perhaps as suggested, enlarging your photo and including a little more journalling ie. birthdate, name etc would be nice. Very sweet page!
Jan 8, 2009
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~Sandrakay~ says:
I agree that the font is all wrong, maybe even more text would be great. The picture should be the main focus, not the embellishments.
Jan 6, 2009
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jezebel_ro says:
The colors are soft and beautiful fits the theme,maybe some different layout would had make the page to pop out?!
Jan 4, 2009
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PurePixels says:
Fantastic first page. Welcome to the wonderful world of digital scrapbooking! Here's my critique for the challenge: When you're creating a digital page, the depth and position of your shadows will affect the realism of the appearance. Try to use "universal light" meaning that all the shadows are positioned as though a single light source was shining on the page.
Jan 4, 2009
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Roniiv says:
Soooo precious.....beautiful page!!!! 10/10cp Thank you pixelpia
Dec 25, 2008
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Claudia says:
(¯`v´¯)¤…10+10 challenge points! .`•.¸.•´Beautiful! Hugs Claudia Thank you pixelpia
Dec 24, 2008
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trishie says:
awww just beautiful Thank you pixelpia
Dec 24, 2008
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