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This is my husband (on the left) and his brothers this summer. "This page is in the Critique Me challenge. Please tell me what you think I can do to improve this page. Any comment that does not follow this request will be deleted. Thanks!"
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SBF, Platinum Print master, embellishments are free downloads, quote from the internet
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tulip_designs says:
This is a great picture! I would recommend a few enhancements...minor... A. Drop shadow B. frame the picture to set it out from the background (People are hating on the background because it eats the picture. If you frame the picture with a white background the plaid background will seem less busy) C. The clip is unnecessary
Jan 13, 2009
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tulip_designs says:
D. The screws can be reduced in size. I feel like they are out of proportion with the page. They feel huge. E. I would use a handwriting font for the journaling so it looks like it was written. Also, I would place the 2008 tab somewhat under the month tag so they look like they are attached.
Jan 13, 2009
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jkeele says:
Great page! 10+10
Nov 16, 2008
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scrapitude says:
I have to agree also with pixelpia but otherwise it's a lovely page
Jan 11, 2009
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jezebel_ro says:
I have to agree here with Pixelpia,otherwise it`s a wonderful page 10chp!
Jan 7, 2009
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Pixelpia says:
My 5 cents here; A more neutral background, and if the rusty screws were smaller you could carry that element through with a rusty sign for backdrop for you text. Rust metal goes well with your journaling :)
Jan 7, 2009
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Faigee says:
Great photo! - background paper is to busy use something solid. Take away the clip holder in the center its a eye-sore use a small paper clip or a straight pin would be a neater look. I would use a different embellishments something smaller for the month and date. Sorry, I am only telling you what I would do.
Jan 6, 2009
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gypsykate says:
beautiful layout, voted 10+10!
Dec 4, 2008
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GG2007 says:
what a great page! I love the quote and the family photo!
Nov 22, 2008
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baybeeluv says:
well done, nice looking brows ,,,lol
Nov 17, 2008
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