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"This page is in the Critique Me challenge. Please tell me what you think I can do to improve this page. Any comment that does not follow this request will be deleted. Thanks!"
Design credits:
Photo by Grandma
Winter Magic Kit by Monica
Fishy Fish Kit by DigiDiva Designs
CJS Overlay
Comments for the scrapbook:
tulip_designs says:
This is a lovely picture but the colors are off. The picture is too washed out. It is "over processed". I would adjust the brightness of the picture and tweak the shadows and highlights.
Jan 12, 2009
tulip_designs says:
Additionally, the elements feel like they are floating. A page always seems better if the elements are anchored to something. Think about a real scrapbook. You wouldn't just lay a ribbon down, you would staple it or tape it or add a button or something.
Jan 12, 2009

Comments for this page: (view all 23 comments)
Little Pink Rose says:
Adorable page! 10+10
Jan 13, 2009
shabba says:
This is beautiful 10p. But since this is the critic me challenge I would say that the ribbon at the bottom flows a bit. I would leave it or put it all the way from the left to right, so it seams connected to the photo
Jan 12, 2009
Pixelpia says:
What a lovely photo! for the critique me challange;
I would keep just one of the ribbons and make the text stand out more. Maybe make the text a bit larger and put it in the bottom right corner. For it to contrast to the watery background you would have to change the color, white might work.
Jan 12, 2009
BonnieMac says:
for the Critique Challenge - I use Scrapbook Plus so I don't have the "shadowing" feature available. Other than that I would love to hear what you think.
Jan 12, 2009
shannonsnan says:
lovely photo and page
Nov 23, 2008
michpics says:
totally adorable! :)
Nov 11, 2008
jezebel_ro says:
Oh dear...he is such a cutie i could just eat him,great page 10chp.
Nov 9, 2008
Scrappy Schnooks~ says:
A GREAT page!!!
Nov 8, 2008
   
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