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"This page is in the Critique Me challenge. Please tell me what you think I can do to improve this page. Any comment that does not follow this request will be deleted. Thanks!" Grandson was just 2 and he got a sucker for eating all his lunch but didn't want to put his pacifier down to eat it (he was new at suckers) so he found a way to put the stick through a hole in his paci and stuck them both in his mouth. We laughed till we cried on this one!
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Cute & Quilted Denim by Jennifer Maceyunas @ www.gottapixel.net and C.W. Picket & Co. Summer Alpha
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tulip_designs says:
I, personally, am not a fan of the thought bubbles. I would do journaling differently. You did a nice job with the pictures you chose and not over powering them with the elements. However, I would make two suggestions.
Jan 12, 2009
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tulip_designs says:
Be more precise with the placement of the elements. Your ribbon the right frame is not lined up with the frame so it doesn't really "wrap" the frame. Also, the frame is not lined up on the right. Also, I don't know why you have placed the three frames in the corner. They look out of place.
Jan 12, 2009
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Ann72 says:
This page is too cute!!! What a smart boy!!!
Jan 14, 2009
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BonnieMac says:
Tulip...you are getting on my nerves! (just kidding). This was one of my first pages when I joined. I see what you mean about the ribbons not being placed right. The three frames were just because I felt the need to kill dead space. Thanks for your suggestions.
Jan 13, 2009
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BonnieMac says:
Shabba, thank you
Jan 13, 2009
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BonnieMac says:
Ok, this is a LOT tougher than I thought! Pixelpia, thanks for your comments. This originally was for a Caption Challenge so I had to put in the captions, but I agree with you on the coloring of them and now that I look at it the letters could be smaller. Thanks.
Jan 13, 2009
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shabba says:
It is a very nice page but I think the colors of the word dilemma don't go very well with the rest of the page. And I don't know if the photo on the right has his whole head on it but in that case it would be nice if you would let his head come out of the frame (by erasing that part of the frame so his head is shown there)
Jan 12, 2009
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Pixelpia says:
For the critique me challange; Love the photos and the theme, my critique would be the sharp contrast with the thought bubbles. I am not familiar with the software you using, but they are a bit sharp, maybe a different color on the text would help. I would also have the lettering of the word dilemma a bit smaller so the pictures themselves are the main focal point.
Jan 12, 2009
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BonnieMac says:
Just a note: I use Scrapbook plus so adding "shadowing" isn't an option. I love this page but it didn't do well in the original challenge. Why not???
Jan 12, 2009
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