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This page is in the Critique Me challenge. Please tell me what you think I can do to improve this page. Any comment that does not follow this request will be deleted. Thanks!
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Everything by me including background, stamps, picture, and layout. Edited in Photoshop CS3
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jezebel_ro says:
I loved first time still do,gorgeous page 10chp.
Jan 15, 2009
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gypsykate says:
very cute photo and layout! 10+10!
Jan 13, 2009
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katydid73 says:
can i start with reminding you of what a fan i am of your pages? :) the photo looks a bit grainy to me, i'm not sure if that was intentional but i would make it clearer if possible. the stars look a bit too transparent as they cross over the white border of the frame. the photo seems a bit too centered- i'm not sure what i would do differently 'bout that. I like the stamps- very cute!
Jan 13, 2009
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pauletta says:
I think that it should be lighter and brighter. Such a beautiful child
Jan 12, 2009
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BonnieMac says:
for me, if I had to say anything its that children normally say so much with their eyes and in this picture his eyes are all but blacked out. Maybe put some color back in there.
Jan 12, 2009
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scrapitude says:
great page! but for a page like this, I would use more color for a page with a child, maybe little stars or butterfly's, or hearts. I would change the frame for a more colorful one
Jan 11, 2009
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joscrapper3 says:
if i HAD to make a change....I would maybe make the word "love" much smaller and put it on the bottom left corner of the picture.. but i really like this page.
Jan 10, 2009
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jezebel_ro says:
The two things may i suggest some soft white shadows on the side of the photo and wordart,the texture of the background and photo is just great and the page wonderful!10chp
Jan 10, 2009
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Pixelpia says:
Ok let's see what could have been differently; I would use a lighter background and use some shadows to create some depth. I think I would skip the starts all together and let the photo be the main focus, but I tend to prefer the more "simple" scraps. That said I like your page
Jan 9, 2009
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Faigee says:
I really don't have a right criticize anyone since I am so new at this and a real beginner...but I guess I have to since that's the rules! You have a beautiful photo and that should be your main focus. I could see a different frame or a different layout would had make the page to pop out more. That's mine opinion.
Jan 9, 2009
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