Here is my second revision - as suggested, I tried making the photos more important and the embellisments less...

I defintely do like it a lot better than the first one but I'm not sure I'm still too happy so MORE SUGGESTIONS ARE WELCOME! Thanks again to everyone in this challenge!!!

Here is my second revision - as suggested, I tried making the photos more important and the embellisments less... I defintely do like it a lot better than the first one but I'm not sure I'm still too happy so MORE SUGGESTIONS ARE WELCOME! Thanks again to everyone in this challenge!!!

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bibidays says:
so sweet... beautiful page
Jun 24, 2008

shadow_dwellette says:
this is really cute!! I really like the strings coming out of the frames, but I think I would have chosen a different pattern for the frames... maybe something a lil brighter... or lighter?
May 9, 2008

Keeper At Home says:
The only other thing that I would do would be to add names, date and journaling. Your re-do really looks great!
May 5, 2008

Sweetiekens says:
these kids are adorable and pages are just as beautiful, great work!
May 5, 2008

JenniferZ says:
Hee hee...Great photos and LO!
May 4, 2008

chrisg says:
Beautifully done page!
May 4, 2008

lukey's mom says:
So cute and sweet!
May 4, 2008

Daniella121 says:
the pictures are adorable, very beautiful done
May 4, 2008

mylilpatty says:
so very SWEET and BEAUTIFULphotos an dpage, very well scrapped!!!!
May 4, 2008