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This page is in the Critique Me challenge. Please tell me what you think I can do to improve this page. Any comment that does not follow this request will be deleted. Thanks!"
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Rose:Net Butterfly:Thaliris[recolored] Papers,pin:jezebel_ro Rope:Kafrounette Lace:CuddleBeez Scraps[our Brenda]
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kruk says:
very beautiful page!!
May 25, 2009
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Roniiv says:
everyone has their own style in expressing oneself..... I personally feel this page is perfect.I love the sharpness of the rose against the dull green colored background and the crystal clearness of the water drops! You inserted the right amt of elements to complete and add additional interest to the page....
Jan 18, 2009
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CapturedMemories says:
congratulations on your win here ... I didn't vote or comment earlier because I always love your work
Jan 15, 2009
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ACountryRose says:
congrats on winning the challenge. it's a lovely page. the only thing I would add, would be a quote/wordart of some kind
Jan 15, 2009
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katydid73 says:
it is a very beautiful photo, but i agree with making it smaller and perhaps blending the edges of the photo into the pink background. if it were my page, i would add a quotation or some word art, but that's just my personal preference. it is a beautiful photo and page-thanks for sharing with us and letting us critique it!
Jan 13, 2009
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triazzle says:
Beautiful page, I would make the square with the rose a little smaller so you can see more of the lace border on top. Also I would either lose the butterfly or pick a black one or one with a brighter color. Gorgeous page, I love roses.
Jan 11, 2009
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shabba says:
This is a beautiful page! All I can think about is that the stitches on the left side are not straight on the paper and the ones on the bottom and the right sight are. (english is not my native language so I hope you understand what I mean)
Jan 11, 2009
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kezcreates says:
Personally, I don't think you need to change anything lol but since I have to for your challenge entry, perhaps a bit more shadowing around the rose to make it pop out more? or sharpen the edges of the back green leafy part so it appears to pop as well?
Jan 9, 2009
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