I made this page for the Say The Truth chal. I know it's not perfect I can't tell what is wrong Please let me know how I can improve it thanks Please follow the rulls and say what is wrong with the page

I made this page for the Say The Truth chal. I know it's not perfect I can't tell what is wrong Please let me know how I can improve it thanks Please follow the rulls and say what is wrong with the page

gypsykate says:
very sweet page, marg. to criicize, i think you should work at focus first - the eyes don't know where to look first. decide on what you want to make prominent - the shoes or photo, make it bigger, put it in the center, minimize the size of the others. also, minimize the colors, too many cool and too many warm colors mixed up.
Jul 5, 2008

Juanita M says:
10+10 I LOVE IT BUT I SUPPOSE IF I HAVE TO FIND SOMETHING WRONG I WOULD SAY THE RIC RAC COULD BE A LITTLE WIDER ON THE SIDES.
Jul 4, 2008

Claudia says:
10 + 10 challenge points for the Say The Truth Challenge!!!! Hugs..Claudia
Perhaps I would have used a different background
Jul 4, 2008

cookiemom18 says:
Adorable page! But the bottom flower only has one pink petal. The tag might look a bit better angled or anchored and smaller.
Jul 3, 2008

Artfulmimi says:
I really like the shoes on the the path. I think I would change the colors a bit to bring your grandson out in the photo.
Jul 3, 2008

*** Verony*** says:
I would change the tag a bit narrower everything else is perfect
Jul 3, 2008

Cindee says:
hmm maybe put the tag under the shoes and enlarge the picture?
Jul 3, 2008

jennifer18 says:
Lovely page! I like the quote in the shoes. Since I have to critique, I would make the photo bigger, have the shoes laid out more in a path, change the background color, and shrink the tag. Anyway, you made a wonderful page.
Jul 2, 2008

redgrannydragon says:
Its a wonderful creative page !! But, as I have to criticise, may be a different colour bg & a smaller tag that is angled.
10 + cps
Jul 2, 2008

mommyj says:
It's a great page, and I understand I have to comment on what should be different..the background is just not right for this and the largeness of the tag distracts from the photo.
Jul 1, 2008