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I made this page for the Say The Truth chal. I know it's not perfect I can't tell what is wrong Please let me know how I can improve it thanks Please follow the rulls and say what is wrong with the page
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gypsykate says:
very sweet page, marg. to criicize, i think you should work at focus first - the eyes don't know where to look first. decide on what you want to make prominent - the shoes or photo, make it bigger, put it in the center, minimize the size of the others. also, minimize the colors, too many cool and too many warm colors mixed up.
Jul 5, 2008
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Juanita M says:
10+10 I LOVE IT BUT I SUPPOSE IF I HAVE TO FIND SOMETHING WRONG I WOULD SAY THE RIC RAC COULD BE A LITTLE WIDER ON THE SIDES.
Jul 4, 2008
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Claudia says:
10 + 10 challenge points for the Say The Truth Challenge!!!! Hugs..Claudia Perhaps I would have used a different background
Jul 4, 2008
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cookiemom18 says:
Adorable page! But the bottom flower only has one pink petal. The tag might look a bit better angled or anchored and smaller.
Jul 3, 2008
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Artfulmimi says:
I really like the shoes on the the path. I think I would change the colors a bit to bring your grandson out in the photo.
Jul 3, 2008
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*** Verony*** says:
I would change the tag a bit narrower everything else is perfect
Jul 3, 2008
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Cindee says:
hmm maybe put the tag under the shoes and enlarge the picture?
Jul 3, 2008
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jennifer18 says:
Lovely page! I like the quote in the shoes. Since I have to critique, I would make the photo bigger, have the shoes laid out more in a path, change the background color, and shrink the tag. Anyway, you made a wonderful page.
Jul 2, 2008
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redgrannydragon says:
Its a wonderful creative page !! But, as I have to criticise, may be a different colour bg & a smaller tag that is angled. 10 + cps
Jul 2, 2008
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mommyj says:
It's a great page, and I understand I have to comment on what should be different..the background is just not right for this and the largeness of the tag distracts from the photo.
Jul 1, 2008
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crzyhelen says:
So cute... i think i would've gone for a different background colour.
Jul 1, 2008
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KimberlyRae says:
Hi dear!! Now is this a 'test' for all of us? Not your 'normal' work, dear..... I LOVE the shot of your Grandson in your hubby's clothes~Cute and wants to be like him...awe. ox
Jul 1, 2008
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NairFlair says:
What a cute photo of your grandson. I also think that the tag should be more narrow. I would have used a background color that would blend with the quote of the shoes. Which by the way is great. 10+
Jul 1, 2008
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Pokkie says:
What a cute and adorable page!!! Looks absolutely gorgeous!!! Love the colours and the layout!!! Fabulous job!!! Beautifully done!!! 10+10cp
Jul 1, 2008
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Thierry says:
great page ! 10+ch
Jul 1, 2008
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belle15 says:
What a great gift for his paw paw. Love the quote too. I have to agree that maybe the tag should be narrower and scewed a bit.
Jul 1, 2008
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kpoddream says:
very nice page but I would maybe move the shoes diagonal from the photo of Christian and make the tag smaller and put it in between the two.
Jul 1, 2008
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usedtobeskinny.com says:
It's a great page,I think all the other comments are great advice.
Jul 1, 2008
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chewange says:
GREAT PAGE! Well done.
Jul 1, 2008
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Buffs mum says:
Really It's a fabulous page and I think the shoes are such a great idea. The only thing I feel could have been done differant is the tag I feel is a little to wide.10+10
Jul 1, 2008
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Ferro says:
Christian in g.pa's clothes is super. Your quote is about trying to fit his shoes, so the shoe insert is OK. The tag could have been a little bit more oblong. Your interpretation is great. Well done
Jul 1, 2008
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pooh_pw says:
Maybe using a different back layer...one that is a little more teal or a different color all together would pull this page together for you. The little shoes are so cute...love this element!
Jun 30, 2008
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Roniiv says:
hmmmmm..... I tend to love it exactly as it is...maybe angle the tag and pin it to the main photo....other than that....FANTASTIC!
Jun 30, 2008
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tulip_designs says:
I would crop Christian out of the background to make his picture pop more. I would also cut the shoes out of their background too and place them along the side of the layout. The journaling is great. You could visually improve it by making the tag a little askew. I hope this helps! By the way, this is a great page and I love the poem! Such a cute little boy!
Jun 30, 2008
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Jaelop says:
GREAT PAGE!!
Jun 30, 2008
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wanwan says:
Awesome page
Jun 30, 2008
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