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I made this page for "THE TRUTH"challengeWich I thik it`s a GREAT,GREAT ideea!!!Before you leave a comment PLEASE,PLEASE read THIS next line...I WILL HAVE TO REMOVE ANY COMMENT THAT DOES NOT CONTAIN CRITISISM,this is the challenges RULE,so please critisaise my page,honest I will not mind,it will make me a better scraper!!!I know my page is not perfect so you`ll maybe will make a point what is wroang!Thank you all in advance!
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Ann72 says:
Challenge is over! So - this is absolutely beautiful!!!
Feb 2, 2009
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gentletouches says:
Well, I think that "Say the Truth" challenge is over, so I don't have to say something critical about your page. That's good, because I think it is beautiful just the way it is. Thanks so much for posting it in the Favorite Older Pages challenge.
Aug 24, 2008
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bibidays says:
stunning page
Jul 13, 2008
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gypsykate says:
beautiful, well balanced layout, jezzy, it just needs something that will stand out to make it more interesting, grab attention, inviting a closer look - like a touch of color, an interesting journal, some special effects on the eyes to make it sparkle.
Jul 5, 2008
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cookiemom18 says:
Very pretty, but I'd like more contrast also.
Jul 3, 2008
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jennifer18 says:
The page is pretty, but I agree that more contrast would be better, maybe even an element of hand painted color like the eyes.
Jul 2, 2008
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redgrannydragon says:
WOW !!! Stunning page !!! BUT (hate this bit) may be no stars & colour the eyes a stunning green or blue (the mask really draws your eye to it) & the lips may be need more colour !!! Otherwise PERFECT !!! 10 + CPS
Jul 2, 2008
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by rideascrapbook says:
This is beautiful. The only thing missing would be journaling in my opinion.
Jul 1, 2008
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My Inspiration says:
I keep staring at this page looking for mistake.. but sorry.. I can't find one.. just too beautiful.. 10+10cp
Jul 1, 2008
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CapturedMemories says:
this is so funny because I get in a lot of trouble for being to honest ... someone once told me they could only find one fault with me and that was I was too honest ... and I am to a fault. With that said, (sometimes I get long winded) My first thought was, this was so Vanilla for you because your work is awesome -- darken those colors with brings your magical touch . Laughing here.
Jun 30, 2008
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chrisg says:
stunning page!
Jun 30, 2008
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Gipsi says:
I would love to see how the eyes in a sapphire blue would change this page. I think the blending of the other colors is very artistic & beautiful!
Jun 30, 2008
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Vickimaree says:
Stunning page. I think I would have made a little more contrast between the light and dark elements. Extremely well done
Jun 30, 2008
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chender says:
Black and White make such a striking layout, and I feel the black could be darker for contrast. Then, just the pop of color for lips and/or eyes would be quite focal on your layout. Such a pretty subject to work with! Kudos
Jun 30, 2008
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Lavender Passion says:
I love it, but much say something and this is my pet peeve from my mom I guess, you shouldn't really use stars and flowers as they usually don't complement each other!! LOve and adore your page that girl!!
Jun 30, 2008
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tulip_designs says:
I disagree, the background color is fine. A darker color would overwhelm the picture. If the woman were larger she would take up more of the page and the background would not be an issue. Also, if she were off center it would be more visually pleasing. Follow the rule of thirds for great pages!
Jun 30, 2008
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Thierry says:
wowow very beautiful page !! 10+ch
Jun 30, 2008
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kpoddream says:
great page but a little darker BG and the bottom right corner needs something to balance it with the other corners..
Jun 30, 2008
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savannah's grand mawmaw says:
a beautiful page but I agree a darker BG and color the eyes but it is outstanding 10+10
Jun 30, 2008
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brendacpfi says:
I love this, but I think if the white background directly behind her would have been a little darker her eyes would have popped more, and a little dropshadowing! But it is beautiful as always!
Jun 30, 2008
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macdi says:
Missing the shadow and glitters in this one.... but even without all that, I love it!!
Jun 30, 2008
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KarynM says:
hmmm who am I to critique anyone's work but if I 'pull it apart' rather than viewing the whole, I would have the white bg darker, as a whole? stunning page as yours always are!
Jun 30, 2008
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Lisadee says:
I love your work as you know but the other girls are right with the depth and I would like to see a little more glitz, shine or glimmer to the girl, just to draw the eye in a little more - but all in all I LOVE this and your colour matching is superb !!
Jun 30, 2008
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trishie says:
this is a beautiful page but a little shadow would balance it out hun, 10cp
Jun 30, 2008
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NairFlair says:
I agree, there is no depth to the page. Therefore, everything blends together. could of used more color. Great design of the layout.
Jun 30, 2008
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Ineke62 says:
It could use a bit of depth by using dropshadows on the paperlayers and overlays...? On the other hand I love it! Well balanced layout, matching colours.
Jun 30, 2008
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